Bites from a Poetry Potluck

by Marcus Goodyear on February 12, 2010

cupcakes

Last week at the end of Lindsay Kate Reedy’s post on the culture of cars, L. L. called folks in the network to find poems about wishes, flushes, or stewards. An odd trinity to be sure.

This week, I’m going to help myself to a little bit of this and a little bit of that, like I do at the church potlucks where fried chicken brushes up against jello salad and cold gamey sausage and green beans with the fried onion thingies on top. These random acts of poetry aren’t any more random than a potluck, really. Every offering has intention. Every offering was prepared deliberately by someone.

Here are some of my favorite bites from this week:

This image from Maureen’s Pictures of Patience

the snap-to
of a rattler
seconds before striking

This sad truth from Jim’s promise I Do Not Beg

We read the texts that crowd
The Christian bookstore,
With terrible beginnings

Glynn’s Church Smiles ending in incompletion

My name is.
I am a.

The fantastically playful and somber rhymes of L.L. Barkat’s Flush

Billy’s kids (not Billy
the Kid), shot a hole
through the weather
with two ice cubes

flushed,

rushed to frosted
window, blue
hoping they’d killed
a school day good,

power

misunderstood.

Grow Up Deep’s imagery and simile in Fly Away

I held dandelions close to my mouth
blowing the seeds away
in one hard push
like dust from a book

The Whole TweetSpeakPoetry poetry gang and their metapoems

There’s a poem
in my dishwasher, somewhere
between soggy spaghetti,
olive oil, the spoils of day.
There’s a poem swishing
its way.

Under the couch
a poem is crouching,
trying to stick
its tongue to my heels

Milton’s poem for a rainy day

the rain lasted most
all day
a background of soft
applause

I can’t say which bite I like best. Why bother to measure brocolli cheese casserole against jalapeno cornbread? Goodness is goodness, no matter the flavor.

The best thing about a poetry potluck, though, is that none of the dishes run out. The kids can’t swipe the last piece of fried chicken. There is always enough apple pie for everyone who wants a slice. So head back to the table. Look over the dishes, and grab a plate of something good from all of the folks who participated this week.

ALL RAP PARTICIPANTS
Glynn’s Yellow Pad
Eric’s An Exchange
Erin’s Simple, Not Easy
Erica’s Poem Interrupted
Marcus’s Evangelism 101
Emily’s Baby Blues
LL’s Steward, Sometimes a Picture, and Flush
Kelly’s Drive-By Shooting
Lorrie’s Fly Away
Erin’s Simple, Not Easy
Jim’s I Do Not Beg
Maureen’s Straight Flush
Mom2Six’s Wednesday Poetry
Monica’s Steward of Blessing
nAncY’s snow day
Kathleen’s Rock Salt
Laura’s The Snow Day I Remember
Milton’s rainy day
Kelly’s When…
Tweetspeak’s poems from a party

Cupcakes Photo by Ann Voskamp. Used with permission. Post by Marcus Goodyear.

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Kelly Langner Sauer February 12, 2010 at 8:20 am

I loved L.L.’s “Flush.” My poetry has always been so serious – I am learning that poetry can be playful too. I never had an outlet for it like the HCB prompts before! Thanks for offering these!

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Laura Boggess February 12, 2010 at 8:32 am

This is quite the feast! Heading back for seconds…

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Marcus Goodyear February 12, 2010 at 9:19 am

Kelly, life is too short for overly serious poetry in my opinion. (Of course, my brand of serious includes zombie ultra violence, so I’m not sure how useful my opinion is on that matter.)

For light-hearted but poignant poetry, I recommend Billy Collins, Sam Hazo, and Walt McDonald.

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Maureen February 12, 2010 at 9:49 am

I had to laugh at your lead-in “favorite bites” paired immediately with my rattler strikes.

Indeed, this has been a great poetry feast this week. And I haven’t even shown anyone the poem I submitted to Strand Bookstore’s love-themed competition.

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Erica Hale February 12, 2010 at 9:59 am

Mmmm, a delightful smorgasbord of words, a feast of poetry! And, unlike the church pot luck, completely calorie-free (and you don’t have to worry about questionable mayonnaise). I love the analogy! And, Marcus, I have always been curious about your zombie fascination. Is it limited to movies? Do you write about zombies much, and if so is it analogous? I’m curious, I have a child who is interested in/terrified by zombies and has come up with some unique zombie scenarios (think “Zombie Little House on the Prairie”). Not to go off on a tangent or anything ;o)

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L.L. Barkat February 12, 2010 at 10:09 am

Maureen, I love the way your mind works! :) And Erica, that made me laugh (the mayonnaise and the Zombie Little House on the Prairie).

I agree with everyone who thinks this is a fun post. I was totally delighted by its playfulness. And now I want some of those green beans with the onion thingies too. :)

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Marcus Goodyear February 12, 2010 at 10:44 am

Maureen, I wish that had been intentional. I’m sure my unconsious mind meant to be that clever. Seriously, though, I love the snake image of patience. Awesome.

Erica, I’m actually terrified of zombies. Most zombie movies scare me to death. (Not talking about Zombieland or Shaun of the Dead, you understand.) I do write about zombies, though. In fact, ahem, my agent is shopping a completed zombie manuscript around. This morning’s rejection went something like this: “We really enjoyed the book. It’s not like anything we’ve ever read…”

LL, glad you liked the playfulness. I think the world needs more play.

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Erica Hale February 12, 2010 at 10:58 am

Marcus, I’d take that rejection as a very excellent complement! I am sure I’ll be putting your book on my reading list soon, and I’m looking forward to it. Maybe it’s the fear of zombies stories, then, that leads to the creation of…more zombie stories? My youngest child has zombie dreams on a regular basis, which is where the Little House zombies originated. She wrote her first book this week, which was surprisingly *not* about zombies but about a troupe of performing cats that juggled hair-balls and, as a grand finale, ate their entire audience. “Unlike anything we’ve ever read” comes to mind again, I think the two of you would get along famously!

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L.L. Barkat February 12, 2010 at 11:38 am

LOL! :) Well, now that’s an approach to interacting with my audience that I hadn’t quite considered. :)

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Marcus Goodyear February 12, 2010 at 11:21 am

Erica, I think I would get along very well with your daughter!

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Kathleen Overby February 12, 2010 at 11:37 am

C’mon Maureen, give it up, the Strand poem. Give us a Valentine! :)
Kelly….play is good. Poetry, I’m only now learning is playing with all my emotions.
Thx Marcus for the banquet. I love good food…Did you know in the middle east-if you break bread with someone-you become one? :) Dang, did I unknowingly trip into an orgy?

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L.L. Barkat February 12, 2010 at 11:40 am

Well then, can’t wait to break bread with you at Mount Hermon! (Will you? I hope?)

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Glynn February 12, 2010 at 1:58 pm

I’m working on a poem about Marcus and zombies: “I Like Zombies, But Only in a Good Year.”

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Erica Hale February 12, 2010 at 2:01 pm

Or…It was a Goodyear for Zombies….(wince) ;o)

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Marcus Goodyear February 12, 2010 at 3:32 pm

I can’t wait!

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Nancy Kourmoulis February 12, 2010 at 3:50 pm

Enjoyed the taste of each and every poem. Had seconds and even thirds of some that were particularly delicious to this soul. I appreciate this outlet for the variety of flavors to sample. I also enjoy the challenge of attempting new recipes to share. Thanks.

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Sam Van Eman February 12, 2010 at 10:16 pm

The post was a playful dinner and the comments a fine dessert. A real Marcus Goodmeal.

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