L.L. here, with a Random Acts of Poetry prompt.
Sometimes I forget that random acts of poetry are everywhere. They’re in my keyboard, my daily work, my daily play.
It doesn’t take much. A smidgen of experience. A tablespoon of vision about any common thing.
Like last week, I was sitting in the sun while my kids played in the pool. It is a pool by our river. Nothing fancy. I just like it because it doesn’t get too busy, and something about the air reminds me of the ocean.
Sitting there, I started looking at the Management’s very sad attempt at a garden. It was hardly beautiful. That is when I suddenly decided to take whatever I could find in that sorry little flower bed and put it in a poem. Really, like I said, it doesn’t take much. Poems will accept the smallest of things.
This week, find a tablespoon of summer. Nothing big. A sound, a sight, something unimpressive. Give it to a poem, and let the poem give it life.
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Here, by the way, is the poem about the un-garden…
Distanced
Don’t worry about
the red star flowers aging to garnet,
or the marigolds blooming yellow,
so, so, yellow, or the pink star
flowers either, which are wilting and
eaten by beetles. Don’t worry
about the wood chips chocolate-colored
dry in the sun, while a breeze is blowing
in off the river, licking chlorinated water
from flat concrete, drifting it to you, from me.
Lavender in a Spoon photo by Elizabeth O. Weller. Used with permission. Post by L.L. Barkat.






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a garden needs to drink
but not drown
soggy heads
hanging down
embarrassed faces
sans sunburns
sunkisses
wet
leggy
pithy
moldy growth
puttin’ on a sad show
worse than broccoli in
her teeth or
slip showing
only
honeysuckles
hostas
and ferns
escape the aching
rheumatis’
gaudy girls
grinning at the
cold
Do you know how much I love it when you speak in poetry?
I love it!
The part about the slip showing made me smile, and I loved the gaudy girls at the end. I am always personifying flowers and such. This was a good one!
Hey now, how are we supposed to follow that miss Kathleen?!
I am on the hunt for an unimpressive inkling of summer… “be very quiet, we’s hunting wittle bits of sunshine.”
Okay, I need some fresh air.
Blessings.
Left a link in a comment over at your blog.. this was a fun prompt.. thanks!
I can see the little garden in your words. I feel a tenderness for it. You paint a lovely word picture.
Kathleen, very good one!
Your poem is wonderful, and Kathleen’s is delightful as well.
Little bits of summer. I can do that.
creative ..by the teaspoonful for sure! no worries here…i will try…
Already I feel the little bits of summer are slipping through my fingers. Perhaps this prompt will help me catch them…
I left a link.
I am in love with that photo…
Little bits of summer. Now that June is gone and school will start in a month and a half. And now Independence Day will soon be behind us, little buts are all we have. I AM going to try to capture a few.
OK, here goes. The first 8 weeks of summer are dominated by my daughter’s participation in the annual summer musical at the community theater.
MUSICAL
tryouts
call-backs
rehearsal schedule
lines
choreography
off-book
notes
late nights
sing out!
costumes
makeup
hairspray (lots of hairspray)
Purgatory Week
dress rehearsal
preview
opening night
full weekends
lazy weekdays
parade float
closing matinee
cast party
What’s next summer’s show?
such a pretty photo!
Oooh… Love yours. Will think on this today.
Summer Camp Highlights
http://writingwithoutpaper.blogspot.com/2010/07/summer-camp-highlights-poem.html